My best blog post is the execution post. In this blog post i talk about the theme, setting, and how Alex has changed as a character. I talk about his personal problems and how he feels. I focus mainly on Alex and furnace and how they interact. Alex was inspired to break out of prison because he found out what the warden does to the kids he takes. When he blew that hole in the ground he didnt think it would lead to underneath the prison. Alex thought, that under ground river, led to freedom.
Next trimester i would like to read more and find a book i can really get into. i read slow so that i understand what it is i am reading, so i would like to be a faster reader. When i write i would like to be more intriguing and leading the reader to believing something will happen until another thing does. I struggled greatly on my comments, i found it much easier to do them in class and easier to blog when i was at home. My Strength when i blog is attention to detail. I do pretty well at rememberign everything i read in that chapter.
Monday, February 24, 2014
details
In the book execution alex has escaped prison and was saved by the army. the Army put him on a metal table and rapped him in shipping wire so he could not move. they put him to the test by loweing him into a cage with a berserker and a soldier who had been turned into a rat. Unexpacted things happened.
the setting is at first in furnace penetentiary then moves to a city, after he is captured it takes place in a military base but alex is in the rooms where they used to lay out sick soldiers along with nearly 60 rats, and berserkers.
the conflict is between Alex and Alfred furnance, the man that he is trying to kill, the man that locke dhim away to do expieriments on him, the man who turned him into what he is.
Alex has changed as a boy, what once was a scared little boy is now a raging monster not scared of any task. He was yanked away from his family. He watched his only friend get shot in the head then he got blamed for it and put away in furnace.
the setting is at first in furnace penetentiary then moves to a city, after he is captured it takes place in a military base but alex is in the rooms where they used to lay out sick soldiers along with nearly 60 rats, and berserkers.
the conflict is between Alex and Alfred furnance, the man that he is trying to kill, the man that locke dhim away to do expieriments on him, the man who turned him into what he is.
Alex has changed as a boy, what once was a scared little boy is now a raging monster not scared of any task. He was yanked away from his family. He watched his only friend get shot in the head then he got blamed for it and put away in furnace.
Tuesday, February 4, 2014
execution
The theme of execution is the entire story about how alex got out of furnace and what he did after he got out. It is in first person from Alex's perspective and when you think one thing is going to happen suddenly what you thought was nowhere near what actually happens.
The setting of execution is furnace penitentiary, a prison that is a mile under ground and is supposed to be impossible to escape out of. Alex did manage to find a way out by outting gas filled gloves in a crack in the floor and blowing a hole in the floor to an underground river.
Alex has changed as a character a hole lot. He started as a kid who just broke into houses and made money do so. In prison he kept to his own and didnt get into fights. He worked in the mine in the prison and thats how h found his way out. When they tryed to turn him into a black suit he could only try to remember his name wile the nector tried to take over his mind. When he broke out he thought he was free, but Alfred Furnace unleashed all his monsters on the city and has now turned the entire city into a home for his beast.
The setting of execution is furnace penitentiary, a prison that is a mile under ground and is supposed to be impossible to escape out of. Alex did manage to find a way out by outting gas filled gloves in a crack in the floor and blowing a hole in the floor to an underground river.
Alex has changed as a character a hole lot. He started as a kid who just broke into houses and made money do so. In prison he kept to his own and didnt get into fights. He worked in the mine in the prison and thats how h found his way out. When they tryed to turn him into a black suit he could only try to remember his name wile the nector tried to take over his mind. When he broke out he thought he was free, but Alfred Furnace unleashed all his monsters on the city and has now turned the entire city into a home for his beast.
Sunday, February 2, 2014
Chapter: Into the pit
When Alex awoke once again, still strapped to the metal table the doctor still stood by his side. She made the other doctors aware that he had was awake. About 10 doctors surrounded Alex and the doctor told Alex they were going to test something and that it will hurt a lot. One of the doctors passed something the to the one standing closest to him but he could not see what it was. She started cutting a half circle in his shoulder; she then she pulled a syringe out of her long white coat's pocket. he saw that it was the nector. nearly a teaspoon, it would do nothing to him. The doctors only wanted to see if it effected his heart rate.
When the tests were done the doctor told Alex she wanted to see how the nector could react in battle. A fork lift picked up the table he layed on and he realized they were taking him to another building. In the building there was a pool, it was empty and surrounded buy a cage. they dropped alex into the cage and it took all he had to get to his feet even using the wall of the pool. On the other side of the pool the cage door opened and out came a berserker. it stood there just looking at Alex. The next animal, a rat. The rat did not have the usual prison uniform but an army suit. the rat darted directly at Alex. Alex could not move being so weak and only held out his arm that the blade stuck out of. there was nothing that hit him. only the breaking of bones. the berserker had thrown the rat against the side of pool hard enough to kill a normal person. the rat stagered up and tried running at Alex again. Again the berker cought it, this time tearing it to pieces; nector poring out of it's torso. the berserker slid it over to alex. It wanted it to suck the necotr out of its body. With no time Alex started sucking up the nector and immediatly the sensation of energy hit him. He climbed the side of the cage where the doctor stood and stabbed his blade arm through. it came up inches short. within seconds there were knockout darts in his back and neck he fell and hit the bottum of the pool he laid with his eyes watching the berserker rocking back and forth as it fell to it's side. Moments later Alex was uncontious.
When the tests were done the doctor told Alex she wanted to see how the nector could react in battle. A fork lift picked up the table he layed on and he realized they were taking him to another building. In the building there was a pool, it was empty and surrounded buy a cage. they dropped alex into the cage and it took all he had to get to his feet even using the wall of the pool. On the other side of the pool the cage door opened and out came a berserker. it stood there just looking at Alex. The next animal, a rat. The rat did not have the usual prison uniform but an army suit. the rat darted directly at Alex. Alex could not move being so weak and only held out his arm that the blade stuck out of. there was nothing that hit him. only the breaking of bones. the berserker had thrown the rat against the side of pool hard enough to kill a normal person. the rat stagered up and tried running at Alex again. Again the berker cought it, this time tearing it to pieces; nector poring out of it's torso. the berserker slid it over to alex. It wanted it to suck the necotr out of its body. With no time Alex started sucking up the nector and immediatly the sensation of energy hit him. He climbed the side of the cage where the doctor stood and stabbed his blade arm through. it came up inches short. within seconds there were knockout darts in his back and neck he fell and hit the bottum of the pool he laid with his eyes watching the berserker rocking back and forth as it fell to it's side. Moments later Alex was uncontious.
Execution by Alexandar Gordon Smith
I left my last post at Alex on top of a building. At the end of that chapter, the army calls in several helicopters. One helicopter shot Alex with a gappling gun and hoist his up to the chopper. A soldier hangs out of the side of the chopper and shoots Alex with five tranqualizer darts. Alex gets very dizzy but trys to stay awake.
Alex awoke on a metal table, wrapped in shipping wire. The doctors soon realized, unlike the others, Alex could talk. Alex still had his min for the most part under control, while the others did not talk, they did not control anyting they were doing, and that they only reacted when the nector told them too. The doctors drained Alex of 90% of the nector in his body. The doctor tells Alex that during the X-ray she did she found over 22 bullets in his body and all of his vital organs had been shredded apart buy the wounds but were still functioning. The only thing he said was "thats what the nector does".
When the dostor left alex looked down to see that his hands were unrapped out of the shipping wire but held down by metal clamps. His right arm that had been cut off and was now just blade had grown longer. His left arm that had been completely cut off up to the elbow now had 3 stubs the size of thumbs. The only thing Alex could think was "was ii trying to grow his hand back? Could it"? The docotr looked down over the balcony and told alex to sleep. He layed there looking around at the creatures he shared a room with. He dozed off close to what he thought might of been half an hour later.
Alex awoke on a metal table, wrapped in shipping wire. The doctors soon realized, unlike the others, Alex could talk. Alex still had his min for the most part under control, while the others did not talk, they did not control anyting they were doing, and that they only reacted when the nector told them too. The doctors drained Alex of 90% of the nector in his body. The doctor tells Alex that during the X-ray she did she found over 22 bullets in his body and all of his vital organs had been shredded apart buy the wounds but were still functioning. The only thing he said was "thats what the nector does".
When the dostor left alex looked down to see that his hands were unrapped out of the shipping wire but held down by metal clamps. His right arm that had been cut off and was now just blade had grown longer. His left arm that had been completely cut off up to the elbow now had 3 stubs the size of thumbs. The only thing Alex could think was "was ii trying to grow his hand back? Could it"? The docotr looked down over the balcony and told alex to sleep. He layed there looking around at the creatures he shared a room with. He dozed off close to what he thought might of been half an hour later.
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